During the showing of my final cut of the documentary to the class i was given some feedback later. This is some of the feedback I got:
Strengths
- Taking both interviews and intertwining their story's together to create a narrative.
- Framing especially the car shots
- Making the interviewee relaxed so they can open up
Weaknesses
- The audio was a bit off showed have put the audio above the wild track/ background music, as well, as the shift of volume between Leonora and Harold.
- Could of had more cut aways
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